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raining bloody delicate

i feel the cool blood
slide down my leg
i feel the rough scars made from the blade
all the pain slowly starts to fade

the fog surrounds me
with tears and fears
silhouetts grip me so tightly
i scream for help
but do you listen?
can you hear me?
im drowning in the suffocation of pain

you said you would take a bullet for me
but your the one with the gun
i try to run but,
the trigger slips
the bullet slides into my gentle skin
the world starts to fade as it rains bloody delicate

as the blood drips down my skin
u sit there with her ignoring my death
with my one last breath i wisper goodbye


i knew u were lying
when u said u cared
i just hope u never saw me crying
for you are nothing

yet u still live in my heart oh so strongly
now that im dying
were farther apart.
im not buying it when you say your sorry
i look up too se the sky oh so stary

u broke my heart in two
after its already been glued
so now im just going
to forget about you



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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 5, 2008
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    omgish i love this poem it is very good/great