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Caress Of Piety

His arms envelop me

with serenity's grace,

as my soul warms to the light

of His purest love.

 

I am guided by

His everlasting word

and to view creation's virtue

is to see through His eyes.

 

Iniquity's hand cannot penetrate

these many blessings,

for I am steadfastly stroked

by clemency's hand.

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I’ve never had the pleasure of looking into his/her eyes or holding his/her in my arms and yet he's/she’s touched me like I’ve never been touched before.

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 19, 2008

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    I see more gthan one way one could interpret this but i think for me personally, what stands out the most is a deep spiritual relaTIONSHIP. This is a beautiful piece you have penned here. You have truly done a great job. The imagery, words and flow blended well together. Best wishes to you in all of your endeavors and thanks for sharing this with me. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der