She stood alone
transfixed by the Dawn
as it rose from the depths
of where ever it comes.
Moments before its arrival,
her breath catches
snared in beauty's forest,
eyes focused
not wanting to miss,
the brilliance of the sun
as it peeks out over the horizon;
captivating her soul,
giving her a glimpse of
eternity in an instant
returning her to
peace
with the knowledge,
she is never alone.
Erigeneia © June 2008
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A lovely mood piece, which really paints a picture in ones mind, spoiled only for me by a somewhat hit and miss use of commas.
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