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im tiered of all u guys who break girls hearts

im tiered of guys
and all there lies
im tiered of us girls and all our cries
why do we bother??
its not like they care
we tell them we love them
and all they do is stair
they toy with our minds
they shatter our hearts
so why do we bother??

xxx

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  • Justin
    June 5, 2008

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    you wrote "tiered," but I think you meant "tired." Grrr... typos!

    You also chose the wrong form of the word "stair." Try swapping it for "stare."

    But yeah, sorry for the corrections. I just already liked this poem and would like to see it better.

    Thank you for sharing this piece with us. It was certainly an emotional write. You seem to have a lot of talent... perhaps you should submit something into my contest? Ah, anyway.... uhm, welcome to All Poetry!