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to dad

these four walls inclose around me
and all i see is black
i sit here bleeding with 3 letters incarved[ily]
knowing you will never come back

i grow colder
wishing i could see you again
my heart grows colder knowing you'll never be here again

i wish you could see how much i miss you
i wish befor i left u could tell you goodbye
so good bye for ever i love you always

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  • x.DeadRomancexx
    June 5, 2008
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    awww thats sad but its a very good poem i enjoyed reading it alot. Gr8 work keep it up.
    xxx