moving?
really?
oh god i hope so.
but wait,
this all seems fake
but then again i guess;
it's you, what else would i expect?
oh dont worry;
you'll be fine
you'll find some weak girl to feed off
to drain her of hope
and suck her of fate.
dont worry sweetie,
bare your fangs
let them see them drip in posion,
oh, so ready to be inflicted.
well sing this chorus out so loud
because honey, we all know you're far to proud.
but wait my ears are bleeding
and you are so out of time, it pierces.
just put on that vunrable face
let them think that they can protect this fragile frame.
and watch the boys swoon in defence
just spin that web of lies a little thicker
and laugh as they all get caught a little deeper.
just flaunt that figure a little more.
let the seams creep a little higher
and they're eyes are distracted away from that face so evil and malicious
dont fret im sure there are some new girls you can "befriend";
and then you can screw them over and spit them out.
oh darling look at all those guys.
strut to them and play innocent;
they'll all find out in time.
when i talk to you no emotion escapes my voice
i keep my face carefully structured,
i bite back the words so willing to spill
i keep my impulses half-heartedly intact.
i hope you hear the hint of bitterness i allow
i hope soon your lies destroy you
i hope they eat you inside out
i hope they tear you apart
i hope you die the most painfull death.
i hope you perish knowing you're the bitch, not us.
her laugh is so bitterly sharp
it will cut through any positivity
any happiness is so turned to pure anger,
i almost feel my burning hatred flow from each pore.
with every word you utter,
i want to retract the knife from my back,
and thrust it so deeply into your face that all your short-sighted vision can see is you're blood so black.
but you know the best thing?
sure they look at you,
but boredom does increase
when your controlling eyes do stray,
stray to your next preditor.
and your face is so easily forgotten
so easily lost.
your just another vermon.
just another snake.
sly as the chick-flick villion.
so please just disappear.
ensnare these twisted half-truths upon someone who isnt aware of this game.
so please just disappear,
and never let me see your two-faced, lying, fugly, skanky, slutty, whore shadow in my sight again.
because i may just rip your eyes out and burn your cold heartless body
love always,
your betrayed friend,
caitlin.
Author notes
well so think of your average skank bitch.
then multiply her skinny lying arse by 10.
and then send her to a different city.
what do you get?
a whole grade of blissfully happy girls.
byebye friend;
trust me,
i WONT miss you
A contest entry
- Masterpieces of Despair (Big Points Dark Graphics Contest) by Sanguinarius.
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Comments
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wow this was really sarcastic. I liked that. And I think that I had a similar experience with the "friend" moving away. I felt the hate and the poem was well-written. However, there were a few conventional mistakes like spelling and grammer... but other than that it was good
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wow i can feel the anger spewing from this piece. i honestly think this puts my poision poem to shame... ok i dont think i know it does. the way you describe her kind of reminds me of black widow, like shes the black widow. absolutly excellent!
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well i disagree with you on that point but thank you so much
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kool very neat thanks for the entry
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Hehe wow, nasty much? She sounds like a real bitch, I know someone just like that. I like the poem though
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Wow, this is raw emotion multiplied. The anger shines through this one dramatically!!!! I can really tell you did not like this girl, lol. Well done for this, you really showed your emomtion here.
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dark ~ pianful - remorsful - angry - hatred - regret - broken - screwed over thats what this poem screams.....i dont exactly know why this person made you feel this way- but one thing is for sure, you have a very good way of putting your feelings and make them a story on paper. awesome job chick.
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AWESOMW
DARK DUDE U ARE MESSED UP...AWESOME LOLZ
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ooooo. bitter. i like it!
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SO AWESOMLEY TRUE
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA SO FRIGGIN TRUE this is so true any one reading this poem know this , this girl has just conducted a string of words to describe a girl so venomously two faced that all i can say is that i fucking hate her too but really again who hasnt she crucified with her wall of lies really i am happy she is moving the two faced little rat
ahh i love this poem i think ill stick it on my wall
lol xox kt
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haha be sure to mention i wrote it
lol god i hate her!
yes i was a little proud of this
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