The first time I saw you
My heart skipped a beat
At that very moment
You swept me off my feet
An indescribable feeling
I always longed to have
With that different spark within me
Say, could this be love?
I couldn't find an answer
To that question in my head
Until I found myself rewinding
Every single word you said
No amount of roses,
Chocolates or bears
Can accurately show you
How much I truly care
I'd like to get to know you
Hoping you'd feel the same way
I hope you see my effort
to lighten up your day
I'd get to know you better
Meet your parents someday
See your soul through letters
We'll write each and every day
Years will come and go
I hope it's not too late
Because no matter how long it takes
You're truly worth the wait
For you, I'll even take the risk
To climb the highest rocks
Cause to me you are the sweetest thing
Inside my chocolate box
Author notes
The Sweetest Piece by crimsonspark
A contest entry
- ANY THING GOES!!!!! by my1lovewearsdiapers.
900 points, ended June 12, 2008, 29 entries
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Comments
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I really like this write but you need to place your user name in your AN I hate having to delete entries from my contests so please get your user name in your AN asap because I really do like this write it is well done
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The second paragraph doesn't rhyme, But the rest is awesome
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Thank you for commenting. I really didn't focused on rhyming on that paragraph. What I'm after is the message of the poem and its flow.
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