Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

cheaters

i am a cheater,
they are all cheaters...
so i guess its only understandable...
yep,
i am stupid.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7

  • LilLegend08
    July 3, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Short but sweet. A tale of love, ended in cheating. Admitting wrongs, possibly? maybe im completely off the track but thats what i gathered from it.
    'Short but sweet' It portrays the point well, i like it =]


  • woahhmikky
    June 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Erm..
    What...?


    Bah.
    This ones depressing.
    I like it better when you write happy stuff..




  • chasingtheday gold member
    June 6, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    do not let others bully you with comments of it needs more, just stick to your guns of creativity

  • chasingtheday gold member
    June 6, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    a good piece of poetry, we can admire ourselves for a thousand years yes, and still come to the same conclusion.

    • Cerbie20
      June 6, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      thank you. i keep getting comments that it needs more, and that its not that good. i might add onto it later. but thank you for this comment!

  • Pretty Britty
    June 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Lol, the person below me... lol
    Really, hun, this isn't even a poem it's a sentence

    make it better!

  • KristyBrainsikk
    June 5, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    horrible poem! Take your time!!
1 - 7 of 7