the hopping of that silly white thing bouncing up and down is making me want to,
kill something. i don't know. it sounds so strange when you say it in monotone.
i float.
bobbing my head to the red of the beat behind
my ears and i feel like maybe i can
remember my name.
the world tips in repeated rows; like corn, or something else that i can't think of.
sun glows in colors of what? it's like a reddishpinkishgreenish.
i don't know, the smoke makes it all so difficult to see.
i think
that i may have
done something that i
shouldn't.
my fingers grasp two tons,
pull hair and feet into a snap dragon position.
bagged goods and the earth tilts below me.
and oops, i spilled a little on your neck please,
let me get that for you.
bronze leaks out of leaves and the daisies are
tipping their heads at me and
singing what seems to be their
last
song.
i wipe my hands on a smiling[?] cat[?] and keep moving foward.
the fur is stiff like paper and i feel like if i just keep
going going
this road will end and maybe then i can figure out why i am so
alone in this black shell.
Author notes
i don't know darling.
i tried to make it dark.
and maybe for me, this is dark.
i hope it was something of what you wanted?
♥
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- Crawl Back Up The Rabbit Hole by Isabel Cult.
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this was really great =] left me speechless. I loved,
"i float.
bobbing my head to the red of the beat behind
my ears and i feel like maybe i can
remember my name."
really amazing.
-jenn
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This was amazing !!
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sounds like a trip.
i like it.
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"the world tips in repeated rows"
&&
"my fingers grasp two tons,
pull hair and feet into a snap dragon position.
bagged goods and the earth tilts below me.
and oops, i spilled a little on your neck please,
let me get that for you.
bronze leaks out of leaves and the daisies are
tipping their heads at me and
singing what seems to be their
last
song."
You know, you're so amazing.
I want to fuck you silly
and have your goober babies
haha sorry, I just felt like saying that.
I love you so much you silly bitch <3
♥
~Princess of Shadows~ -
I am blown away. This is fantastic honey!!!
Wow...
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