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Your Child's Play Mind

Your child's play mind
A fictitious manifestation
Burrowing deeper into the unknown
Reaching the rancid infestation
Contemplations of past mistakes
Hopeless folly in every move
Grinding the gears
With everything to prove
Your pretentious manner
Searching for extortion
Devouring my brazen words
Fading your contortion
Meaningless filth you create
Mine is far more influential
Defy me as you wish
It's all just as differential

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  • AliceInTheRealWorld
    June 5
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    I love the undertone of confidence, it all fits so snug together and isn't at all trite,