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Empty Words

Dearly departed beauty
With lips so frail
Mouthing softly
Words of pure
Innocence

A broken bow you grip
A violin
Long shattered
And tender with age
Woken up with
Light movement

You shift delicately
And yet darkly
Without
A reason for your pity
Do those lost eyes
See far? 

How can you feel anything
When all you do
Is sit there
Looking pretty and weak
Singing all those
Empty words?

Author notes

Inspired by myself, don't ask how, I'm not sure. So incredibly weird, but I really like this piece. Hope you do too! Any suggestions are appreciated!

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  • BurnedImpulse
    June 18, 2008
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    Loved it. Beautiful!
    keep it up!


  • kyuuketsuki ai
    June 7, 2008
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    Wow..this really reminds me of Cathy from wuthering heights. Even the violin bit. Excellent!


  • AllYoullNeverHave
    June 5, 2008

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    I really like this too, sis! It is weird but I'm into that weird poetry of yours. this is excellent! So beautiful... this is just... really good. good job sis! love you!

    ♥Chelsea