Fluttering pleas fleeting
from heart,
searching for haven
to indulge
in a quiet siesta;
entire world
appearing petit,
as they float
like balloons
towards heaven.
Author notes
Prompt;
Writing my tangled emotions on blue drifting clouds...Amai Kanashimi
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A contest entry
- 7/25 words...Prompt is UP!!!! by Sweet Sorrow.
425 points, ended June 5, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats. on the Bronze!! Another well written piece!!!
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What beautiful words! Well done on the bronze!
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful take on the prompt, so poetic. Thank for sharing and goodluck you
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you!
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