Poisoned tears
r-----u-----n
d
e
e
p
into b.r.o.k.e.n
mirrors of my soul's desire.
You Snatched away life,
leaving; f-o-l-l-o-w-i-n-g another.
Was I NEVER good enough for you?
Author notes
Prompt - Crystallised tears flowing on my salty lips...Amai Kanashimi
5 poets
25 words
A contest entry
- 5/25...PIF Quickie....Prompt is UP!!!! by Sweet Sorrow.
425 points, ended June 5, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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oh wonderful..dirty pretty brilliantly done, so captivating, congrats on the silver my pet Kitty
Cin
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Strong words..congrats on the silver!
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Very creative piece of work. The presentation is so unique, well chosen words that speaks pain. Excellent!
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