Find that crimson cloud
to pillow my fantasies,
where stained shadow of past dont linger
and my soul shall find some peace.
Give me the key to all my questions,
mould my dreams to reality.
Fill my heart with the grace of mercy
forgive those who have forfeited me.
Author notes
WORD BANK-
Cloud
pillow
soul
shadow
forfeit
find
question
stained
linger
mould
A contest entry
- Word Bank, Word Limit by piccola.
600 points, ended June 7, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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yes , quite a few spelling goof up, i will just correct them.
thank you -
good job with the word count! Nice job all around except for 3 spelling errors and one of them was mine too. Molded is moulded, (I have to edit the contest and one of my posts
forfiet should be forfeit (my mistake also) There was one more but I can't remember. Good job though and thank you for entering.
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