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[ As I lay down on the pillow of clouds ]

As I lay down on the pillow of clouds
I stare down at the shadows of the darkened souls
Trying to forfeit their life because they're done
questioning it
But as I linger over head
I find that love is the thing that moulded them
But their lives are stained forever

Author notes

I watch this go on every day of my life when I look into the mirror

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  • samiisblue26
    June 30, 2008
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    Im lovin it girlie! for real. thsi is great =D

  • piccola silver member
    June 5, 2008

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    right on with the word count. Good job. Just a couple of things and one of them is mine too. Molded is spelled moulded and over-head is not hyphenated. This is lovely though and thank you for entering.


  • ucancallmereal
    June 5, 2008

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    wow. that confused me but it was so very interesting. i can tell a lot of thought was put into it. wow. okay i think i get it now.. just dude that was gooood im shocked how that all makes sense. great work!

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