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[ My memories of you ]

My memories of you
are as clear as day.
The way you looked,
the way you smiled,
the way you laughed.
The way I thought you cared.
You've torn me apart bit by bit.
Left me empty and bitter.
For you made me think you actually cared.
I try and try,
and what do I get?
No reply.
I try to forget
that you were ever here.
But once I think I'm ok
there you are.
Creeping into my thoughts,
my dreams, my desires.

Why is that we want something that we can't have?

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  • Sandygram silver member
    June 19, 2008

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    Very Heartfelt.

    You have penned a wonderful but sad poem. I know the feelings well. Your emotions can be felt in the very heartfelt words. Thank you for sharing. You take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy