We are dust
beneath gods feet
nothing more then a flower
in a field that can be blown over
and disapper
so what do you think
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sounds good but it's really small
it sounds good though
very well done
love you
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i like it. it's small and beautiful. the background makes it all the better. you spelled disappear wrong tho. but yeah good write!
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Well
As they say.. Dust in the wind. Yet who really knows? I have my ideas andI think those in thisgroup have their own. But we must still hope dear poet
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This is amazing for such a short piece.
Straight to the point!
Love the message!
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yep, strange to think how insignificant we all are
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i like it short sweet and to the point. just like this comment
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