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Drum Beat

A sad girl
finally smiles
when she hears the beat.

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Describe yourself in 10 words.

I march to the beat of my own drum. That basically inspired it. I just went from there

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  • OCDPolarBear
    June 21, 2008

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    wow i really like this... short but simple and amazing. well done i think we all have our own beat that sometimes goes slower or faster... by the way thanks for the comment on my poem, it means a lot to me. thanks again.


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    Very nicely written. I didn't know what to think when I saw the title but it fits nicely ^^

    Thank you for entering and I wish you luck!
    Noir xx


  • craftyangel43
    June 4, 2008

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    I think we all march to the beat of our own drum, if we didn't the world would be so monotone.
    Good job! Good luck.
    Cheryl


  • faithwhisperer silver member
    June 4, 2008

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    Like this idea, and your background and text is great! My son marches to a different beat too!! I can relate totally also! Keep it up!