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Darkness Play

Glinting pearls of precious light
Reflect image of ivory skin
As I reach into the night
To trace lines of supple sin

Under piercing moonlight above
Encompassed by velvet cover
Environs silent as a dove
Intermingled with my lover

Harken to crickets chirp
And sounds of darkness play
As we caress gently inert
Concealed from light of day

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  • Angelflower
    June 5, 2008

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    Ooh. this was really nice..
    Very sensual and sweet..
    The imagery was vivid as well,
    So you bring the reader into the write..
    I really enjoyed reading this..
    Thank you very much for sharing..
    Best of luck..

    Angel


  • DrkPoet silver member
    June 4, 2008

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    This is very well written, soft and sensual with some very nice imagery. Hope you do well with it in the contest, it's quite good.