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Fanatical Soul




Fervent shadow,
perturbing my friends,
dismal uncertainties,
until they weaken.




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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    Interesting use of words. I can't say I've heard of the word "perturbing" before now, But I must say it's prety cool!

    I wish you luck in the contest,
    Noir xx