Shedding invisibility.
Different chances;
uniformed faces.
Jump-starting time...
Living always.
Author notes
This is me. This is what I do. This is how I live.
I hope I made sense. Enjoy...
Oh yes... And I used the soild blue for a reason. My favorite color is blue. That's how I background all of my poems unless I need to use something else for some reason. Sooo... I hope I don't lose brownie points for that. It does fit... Because blue describes me.
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten words by Noir mariposa...x.
400 points, ended June 5, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment honestly please. But don't be rude. CONSTRUCTIVE CRISTISM is welcome. But don't bash me; I work hard.
Comments
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beautifully done!
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Thanks.
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I actually really like this shade of blue.
And great word choices, too. Very unique ones, I might add. They describe you well.
Honorable mention, sweet! Good work!
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I do too. Thanks.
Thank you. It look me a while to get them right.
I'm glad I did well.
Yep! Yay!
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Wait, where have the claps gone?
*runs back and tries again*
Yay!
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Smart Jojo! Hehehe
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Aww, this is awesome. You say a lot in just ten words.
Slight typo with the word "Sheding", its "Shedding" but anyways
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Thanks.
I fixed it.
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"Shedding" has two D's.
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I know. It was a typo, due to the late hour. I fixed it.
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If you ever read any of my poems, 90% of the time they've got a black background with pink writing coz that's how I write so I understand your background choice
Very nice and I wish you well with the contest,
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Yeah.
Thanks.
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This is awesome! I love how you described yourself..
Good luck!
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Thanks.
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