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My Pathway

A traveller

wistfully glancing

upon this earth

gathering to

..leave

 

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 5, 2008
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    sad but very beautiful darl...says so much


    Cindy


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    Awww this is so beautiful but sad at the same time. I agree with individuality, we do seem to travel across the earth, but gathering up everything in preperation to leave.

    Thank you for entering my contest,
    I wish you luck.

    Noir xx


    • tainfinite
      June 5, 2008
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      tainfinite

      gathering to leave; as in memories experiences love experessions; and not taking them to death; just leaving earth. thanks for running the comp i enjoyed it very much


  • Blood Bloom
    June 4, 2008
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    So much truth in so little words. Bravo.


  • individuality gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    a good short piece, aye i guess we are all the same, as we are born we spend the rest of our lives preparing ourselves for the end.

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