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Phlegm

Wickedly sinister,
ashamed,
obnoxiously charming,
seemingly controlled,
out of place.

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Describe yourself in ten words.

I chose Phlegm as the title because that's what my friend calls me.

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  • notorious gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    Phlegm!

    OH MY GOD somebody else had a nickname that was 'Phlegm!' Damn, and I thought I was being original.

    "what my friend calls me."
    I'm sure you meant "bestest friend in the entire world." HAHA, just kidding. 'Best' is good.

    "seemingly controlled"
    Shouldn't that be "uncontrolled, out of place." It's more logic. If you mean literal phlegm or even metaphorical phlegm, phlegm (for me) never feels controlled...it's annoying and painful!!

    Rather amusing write and your formatting is improving...


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    One of my friends had the nick-name of Phlegm too. Don't know how it came to place but still!

    "seemingly controlled,
    out of place."

    Powerful ending ^^

    Good luck with your entry
    Noir xx


  • faithwhisperer silver member
    June 4, 2008

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    What an interesting nickname!!! Interesting mix here, at least you definitely do NOT seem boring, and I like these adjectives!! Nice write!