Every road we choose
good or bad
is a hallowed one.
The trick
is not being hollow
and avoiding the stones
looking out for caves
or the echo
from the wind
will give you a w a y.
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A contest entry
- [ Labyrinth of Thoughts ] by Desire.
700 points, ended June 9, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Paradiso ex machina
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept seeing a male on a motorcycle as if traveling-Soul searching on his bike; making pit stops when necessary~
Kept seeing like a quarter tossed- heads or tails- based decisions on heads- it felt like from what I was seeing~ that any indecisive questions-a coin was flipped
Hearing what sounds like: Rocky Road~ whether the ice cream or metaphor~
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Every road we choose good or bad
is a hallowed one.
Beautiful Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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