A forgotten young soul
trapt
in this thing called
Reality.
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten words by Noir mariposa...x.
400 points, ended June 5, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nicely done. My only criticism is the word "trapt"; it should be "trapped". Otherwise, this describes far too many.
Congratulations on the placing.
Thank you for sharing.
rous
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Congrats on the silver!
Wow, fab piece, you have given this lovely pic a breath of life. This really is an awesome piece, the more I read it the more I like it. Congrats on a much deserved silver
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I love that picture.
I applaud loudly at the words too, they describe so much in so little words
Thank you very much for entering
and I wish you the very best of luck.
Noir xx -
Wow. A beautiful pic with great words. I wish you luck!
~Kystal
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I agree with you faithwhisperer looking for the way out has also kept me occupied lots of times. Great write Cynanidekisses. Good luck.
Cheryl
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Really find this pic interesting, and the statement is well-expressed! Looking for the way out has kept me occupied at times also!! Best in contest!
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Wow. Love the image and your poem says so much. Fantastic write and good luck in this contest!
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