I looked at the screaming faces,
They yell and shriek,
But I cannot move,
I feel frozen,
Then something hard and cold,
Hits me fast,
Pain fills everywhere,
Blood fills my lungs,
faint screaming,
loud ringing,
Now is the time,
Death so soon,
My first kiss ended up,
To be my last,
soon I hear an angel's voice,
"Don't leave me star,
Please stay,
I love you,
I really do,
But please don't let this be a goodbye",
My eyes wake to bright lights,
In a white room,
James sits by me,
biting his lip,
tears flowing down,
He tells me to rest,
And kisses me goodnight,
This won't be the last night,
That I spend alone,
James is here,
Now I'm not afread,
Nothing is wrong,
My life is not over tonight,
It's just beginning...
Author notes
I hope you like this....It really happened....
A contest entry
- Life by Samcat.
500 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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I enjoyed this poem. It was a great write. Afraid was spelled wrong , just telling to help you catch it. Good luck in contest and keep on writing. I wanted to give you 3 claps, but I did not have enough points to do so.
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wow
very good
I like this poem alot it was very well written and has a good sense in death in it
thank you for entering
good luck
keep up the good work
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wow..amazing.. i really like this..good luck in the contest..
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Very Good. How scary this must have been for you. A nice life lesson learned also. Love will bring you through.
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It's an amazing write so ofcourse i'll accpet you. I don't mind a few lines it's just if it gets to like 10 or more over. Yeah amazing choice of words great write!
Good luck!
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that was amazing!! you're really good!!!
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Really great writes, sad, an unexpected ending. I LOVED IT, great job!!!
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Very descriptive,,,, you should write books
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wow i like this poem..its sorta dark..and deep also...and sad..wow it was very good.. i loved reading it..kept me on the edge of my seat
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You misspelled Afraid in line 31. Other than that, Its a great poem
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do you like it
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YES!!!
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