Christs light
Brings forth a new spirit...
Of Love,
Of Faith
Of Hope,
And Beauty.
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words X - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 8, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
And only
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: The Light of Christ...
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept seeing a flag waved~ but feels as if a storm approaching- tornado- type of element whether metaphor or actual event~
Strange as it may sound I am seeing what looks like lipstick- but there is something about this lipstick~ like a deeper meaning- ruby red- hearing words: ruby red
also seeing word: camel- and seeing one- Seeing finger point as if saying You-
what looks like trinkets...Gifts for the King- on the back of these camels- Hearing phrase: Gifts for the newborn King
Hearing word: Ancestry~ hearing word: Solomon- being shown the left side of the family tree as if mother's side- again- word: Solomon-
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Brings forth a new spirit...
Beautiful Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Excellent
Good form and very well put..
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Thanks for your comment on my poem...It will be hard to beat the true reflections poem in this same contest!
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