Well they say that your no good
close your eyes and cry
what harm can words do
try to fit in
but your just a sin
get under your skin
changing your mind
tell all those lies
fake a smile
stay a while
make it work
make it smile
make it laugh
cover the worthless
in gold and silver paint
don't let them get you
they want you to die
A contest entry
- Anything and everything-prewrites allowed-2nd contest by Midgetbridgey.
350 points, ended July 11, 2008, 245 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Desperation leaks through imaginary happiness... by Clinging-to-Life.
800 points, ended July 8, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hmm...this was a unique write...though I think you should consider some punctuation and whatnot...also I was asking for imagery and there was not much imagery in this piece. over all, I think you need to spend a bit more time editing and refining this write.
thanks for entering, nonetheless.
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