We burnt in effigy
all the cinders
of our past.
Relinquishing
that nothing space
when we neglected
and forgot each other.
Into the nights wind.
Author notes
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'relinquishing
that nothing space'
brilliant lines. Quite striking. One of my favorites of yours so far.
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I think this is done
It is short yes but it says so much. That nothing space, is where there is rooom for so much to occur. To let go of that peice of time leaves an option in either direction...... to forgive and forget or to hold on and prevent it from coming again.
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