Sunshine beats upon my skin
Summer days are here again
Scent of blooms in the air
Reddening of my skin so fair
As we walked upon the sand,
gently; lovingly you took my hand
The oceans' roar, it seemed so calm
Our love was singing like a psalm
Didn't care my skin was burning,
for your kisses I was yearning
As your lips met with mine,
our hearts and souls did entwine
That summer day you stole my heart
Please God, let us never part
Author notes
I would like another sister
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Comments
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I like the sweetly worded passion in this poem, and the line 'Our love was singing like a psalm'.
Thanks for entering, and good luck.
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What a sweet, romantic poem. Beautiful! Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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This has a sweet musical feel to it!!
"Didn't care my skin was burning,
for your kisses I was yearning"
A touch of humor never hurts!!
Thanks for entering
darlintlc
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Sweet piece you get here and I like the subtle sentiment written within the lines
I like how you described the feel of the scenes for the reader to imagine and all those in a short write- nice one!
All in all, a serene poem this is
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Thanks for entering my family, What member do you want to be??
PL
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just got back from the beach. Thanks for reminding me of my reddened skin. ouch! thanks for entering
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poem was good tho hard to read with the stationary. Thanks for sharing. trekkergirl
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A lovely little piece, you really captured the essence of summer love!
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A cute description of love, feels so serene an innocent.
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Awsome poem. There's alot of feeling in this poem. I'd love for you to be my second momma!
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thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck. You like to enter my contests
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Shelly -
Wow i like this alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck. ..<3.. Shelly
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Wow...You described that summer day so well. This is very well written i like it alot. Cute/ Short and sweet what more is there to ask for. My favorite part is when you said "As your lips met with mine, our hearts and souls did entwine" that was worded so well. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly -
Wow...You described that summer day so well. This is very well written i like it alot. Cute/ Short and sweet what more is there to ask for. My favorite part is when you said "As your lips met with mine, our hearts and souls did entwine" that was worded so well. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
Lyrical enough to be a song, perhaps one sung by the "Beach Boys." I can see you tangled up in love. Good write and thanks for your entry.
Happy trails
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Sounds like a perfect date!
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That's so lovely!! Very romantic and I jut loved the line "our love was singing like a psalm"
Sigh.. oh to find a love like that!
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aww how beautiful mom! ILOVE IT!
NICE ONE
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