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Props 2

It was obvious she was not real.
No badge..no clip board
How do you take orders
for a newspaper, if you
have nothing to write them down on?

As it was, Kat, heard the offer
knowing it was a too obsurd to be genuine.
She stepped away from the door
long enough to make certain
the girl's image and face were clear

on the surveillence camera.

It was. 
So, she forwarded it to me
and I recognized that face.
All it took was a quick
search of old photos

And I had her pegged.
Also, Kat recognized her
stopped at the corner
digging through the back
of a brown pick-up truck.

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Just so you know. Props...you should always use props.

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  • leo2
    June 8, 2008

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    It certainly pays to be vigilant these days. Events like this are probably why I can't bring myself to the point where I cancell my cell phone service... Just where the hell are the Jehova's Witnesses when you need them?...lol

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • Just4u
    June 5, 2008

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    Some may come and some may go
    Some return again for "show"
    Some may leave their presence gone
    But in their mind their strung alone

    Some may wait and some may play
    But what will be in coming days
    Some will plot for hurt they felt
    but if love's held, their hate will melt

    Hugs...Eddy

    • Apparition
      June 26, 2008
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      Thank you, Eddie for the commnet. Always appreciated. Have a good week.


  • Love Me For Me
    June 4, 2008

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    Not to sure I understood it but I did like it a lot because it grabbed my attention. It was interesting and made me wonder.