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Follow the Light

Spirits wind weather worn

breezeway hearts forelorn

lost souls mortal plight

Jesus holds
 
guiding light.

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Photo prompt
Please let the picture stir Your rue...
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  • Desire gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Follow the Light
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept hearing word: Frazier- what sounds like Frazier~ I'm actually being shown the character Frazier from the show- personality something in regards to his personality and what looks like James Dean- reference to: Rebel Without a Cause- nudged to mention that phrase~ Nudged to also add: Use what tool You have- within You
    Reference to communication can heal many hearts- not doubt Your words of woe
    as if You can relate in some sense but also share in understanding~
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Jesus holds guiding light.
    Beautiful Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • dustookie2
    June 5, 2008
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    You follow the path of the light which radiates it is not for you to judge ........... do not judge yourself too harshly. Words of wisdom this prompt has brought forward excellent prompt credit to Desire. Brilliant take you have presented i feel this is not so much a contest but a inspiration for life..


  • Talking Toni gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    Breathtaking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Your words, though very few took my breath away as did the sight of Jesus in the heavenly photo!!! Thanks for sharing with me tonight and as always your writing is uplifting and encouraging!!! Thanks again!!!~~Toni~~


    • Roaddog Wolf
      June 4, 2008
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      Thank You

      Toni for your kind words I am pleased you found the piece to your liking.