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YOU'VE GOT ME
IM HOOKED, THOUGHT
I COULD SHAKE IT BUT
IM SHOOK.
YOU GOT ME TOSSING AND TURNING
LIKE A WHEEL
IM REALLY TRYING TO OPEN
AND TELL YOU HOW I FEEL
SINCE IVE MET YOU WE'VE SPENT TIME TOGETHER
WE'VE TALK AND LAUGHED
YOU'VE EVEN WRITTEN ME A LOVE LETTER.
I WANNA TAKE THIS TIME TO TELL YOU THANK YOU
FOR MAKING ME SMILE, AND MAKING ME FORGET
ABOUT PROBLEMS IVE HAD FOR A WHILE, TAKING ME TO NEW
PLACES, ASKING ME HOW I FEEL, HOW WAS MY DAY,
YOU KNOW WHAT I CAN GO ON AND ON AND WRITE A ESSAY
YOU'VE SHOWED ME A DIFFERENT LIFE STYLE,
I THINK IM GOING TO STAY THIS WAY
FOR A WHILE


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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 4

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    This is great! It's a wonderful feeling to have someone like this in your life. I love your background here. Beautiful work and thanks
    for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826


  • Tortured Poet
    July 7, 2008
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    i love this poem! ur so awsome at writeing! this makes me think about my bf, I love ur work! I guess thats why ur one of my favorites! I love how u write about romance and sex cuz u make people see the good side of it all! and yea I just like ur work alot!


  • D Saul So Sexy
    June 19, 2008

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    different i liked this here ga you did ya thang on this nice job i enjoyed reading this

    ya boi D


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    June 18, 2008
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    Ok I loved the BG and the write is sweet

    • ladyhurricane
      June 19, 2008
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      Thanks Im glad you like it I have the bg on my desk top and I just thought it would be write on for this poem!!


  • Ephiphany
    June 12, 2008

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    First off I love this BG...u know Im odd as hell Gotta get me a Martini before I can figure out this kaladiscope Or you can just tell me

    great imagery dear

    -ephiphany


    • ladyhurricane
      June 19, 2008
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      Hey sis Im glad you liked it... And you might need more than a martini!!!

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