My desire for you
is pure bliss,
your hands bring out
the freak in me.
Waiting for my lips to
touch yours
induldging,
intoxicating,
sends me in
a trans,
wanting you more,
I ache for the
time to make
you unwind with
all my rivers
that lead to your soul.
A contest entry
- Looking for true inspiration by unanswered.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Way Emotions Feel by D Saul So Sexy.
450 points, ended June 20, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What wins bronze around here? by AutumnGypsy.
550 points, ended August 27, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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This is a saucy little number, you are making a definate statement here lol. Nicely written best to you
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damn! is what physically came out my mouth this is a damn great poem here i happen to think you did a very great damn job good luck in my contest
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this was sensuality at its best. This was erotic but in a delicate romantic way. I really enjoyed it. thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
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Indeed this is a FIRE piece
truly amazing imagery in this. Thank you for your entry and good luck.
-e
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Romance, erotica and abuse
seems to be the three things we both like to write about. Talking about love and its need is quite an outlet.
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Ya gotta stop for a while. You are so so good at erotica. Makes me horny LOL. Great poem! Glad my man is here LOL
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Niiiiiice! this has a wonderful feeling of passion and wantoness. it captured my heart and made me long for that feeling of pure intimacy! great job!!!!
♥rianna
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