How can I write my poetry?
So out of touch, with reality...
Emotions swirling in my head,
translated wrong, when read.
Mind to pen; broken circuit,
write my thoughts then re work it.
Not sure I can find the words,
to make my feelings truly heard.
Author notes
Option #3
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4117207
I titled it double or nothing...because I doubled your
quickie thought!
A contest entry
- Option Contest by Michael-B.
600 points, ended June 15, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellant I love it, your poem definately does double my thought. Very well written and the simple rhyming scheme is great. Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent work, Islekine! No short circuits in your writing mechanisms!
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