Don’t hide Ur feeling inside
Tel me the secret to the door inside Ur heart
Listen to the waves of my voice; it’s bigger than ocean tides
It will take away
save you, fill Ur empty heart
My Psalm poetrically worded, just for you
Don’t shield me away
look inside my eyes, you can see the true
Songs that u have missed, we can sing it all day
Like Adam and Eve in Genesis, we will kiss
No matter if the devil hiss
Don’t hide Ur feeling inside
How will I know when you need a ride?
When to sit by your side
Dry your eyes, no more time for tears
You needed some one to miss, kiss all this years
Here I am baby I come from the west
With strong shield and a medal vest,
I will shelter you with my arm
you? nothing will ever harm
Author notes
i do care about you
A contest entry
- I Need new rhyming favorites by piccola.
900 points, ended June 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ranting and Raving by ourgirlFriday.
600 points, ended June 11, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting twist
on ranting and raving, the frustration of wanting to love someone who's closed off to you. I can see where you're coming from. Thank you for sharing, best of luck in the contest!
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I really enjoyed the end of this...it feels so strong and protective. Thank you very much for entering.
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