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incarcerated

incarcerated
I hear a meadowlark
through the bars

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  • Thor-201
    April 15
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    What a brilliant haiku! Well done!


  • Ellis gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Very Effective

    Very Real


  • azure85 gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    incarcerated
    I hear a meadowlark
    through the bars

    Very unique haiku, and one which contains a good AHA moment. You do not know until the end, who is the one behind the bars. Thank you so much.


  • Phlegm
    June 4, 2008

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    I really like this. You need some punctuation here and there but it takes nothing away form the sheer beauty of your words.

    Incarcerated is just a lovely word, no matter what the true meaning is.

    Great job and good luck in your contest


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 4, 2008
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    Perfect! Vivid!
    This is how I feel every morning, only no bars... and it's a mockingbird!
    Marlene

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