Deep blue skies above
Perfect green grass below me
Trees waving freely
A contest entry
- Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended June 6, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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its short, but... I like it because it makes you almost believe that you are in this happy place.
reat job once again
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This is an excellent haiku! I really enjoyed reading this.
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Very impressive! Good to see you've cleared the blockage. I like the imagry that you have and this definitely feels like a haiku when it is read. Good luck in the contest!
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Deep blue skies above
Perfect green grass below me
Trees waving freely
Very pretty haiku, with the colors of the seasons shining brightly. Thank you so much.
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It's a nice haiku, but the title caught me off guard and the blue sky and green grass seem alittle cliche XD But it's good overall, and good luck in the contest
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Very nice, peaceful, calm haiku. Beautiful imagery in such few lines. I can really feel the emotion and being in the situation. Good job!
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Preeeeeetty *.* really calm and beautiful, and the background compliments it so nicely!
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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Good haiku
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