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my pulse

these dreams only
defeat the purpose
this comfortlessness still goes on
as if i nver bothered
too try and stop it
with each receding breath
i feel my pulse
find te razors numbing remedy
this lethargy
has completley taken over me
now i only see
the disheartenment in
everyday.

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