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[no moon tonight]

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no moon tonight
relying on crickets
for direction





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  • azure85 gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    no moon tonight
    relying on crickets
    for direction

    This is a great nature haiku, with the use of sound from the crickets. Thank you so much.


  • just mercedes gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    this stunned me. although a haiku should be about what is there. but this just stopped me in my tracks.