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Quick Thought 4

Missing image
Lost in thought,
Floating away.

Another bitter end,
To another sweet day.

Author notes

Ok the poem was written coz I was feeling slightly down, however after being sent this photo in an email i thought it fitted perfectly with my poem for a bit of humour and therefore helped perk me up a bit.

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  • devils angel
    June 15

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    it'samazing how they say a picture is worth a thousands words but here you simplified it to just 12 and it all fits in well. gr8 job!!


  • xXxDhracexXx
    June 13

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    Trapped here
    But free to go

    Love in my soul
    hate in my heart....


    that is just what came to mind..I like this...I'm entering your contest, but I like this poem it seems to be a poem of opp. oxymorons ect....and i agree the picture is a funny add in...


  • toomysterious
    June 5

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    This was very inspired. Lots of the contests you know call for a lot to be said in short poems. This was very well done and compliments the picture perfectly or vice versa.


  • Justin
    June 5

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    Haha... wow.... I wouldn't have ever thought to sum up that picture with what you wrote. Very creative and original. well done!