Thank You God for this universe
In your message to man you did say
"man be grateful and open your eyes
see the beautiful light of the day"
Thank You for giving me a brain to use
although 90 percent is not open
I know as I grow and I follow your rules
that your promise to me has been spoken
My vibrating energy attracts what I think
and thoughts can get very confusing
But I see the results of stating my wants
I know it's vibrations I'm using
The law of attraction is powerful stuff
nothing to mess with I know
Thinking good thoughts isn't enough
Believing will make those thoughts so
If I feel resentful and miserable too
and focus on trouble and strife
all that will come, is more of the same
and I'll live a most miserable life
So thinking of good stuff and what I can love
will cause a flow back reaction
I want to give thanks now to my God above
for I've learned of the law of attraction
Please tell me what you think
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well done
like your work, I went to few and enjoyd alot..you seem very talented one...bst of luck... hope you go through my poems if they touch your heart -
Well balanced verse and rhyme. Very deep and profound. Overall, Awesome!
You rock!
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This is simple yet profound, with remarkable spontaneity! Brilliant endeavor!! I am glad I came across this:-)
Thanks for sharing the wonderful message. All the best
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Very Unique and Awesome!
I think that this poem is awesome it explains one important part that you get out of life. This poem must be very impotant, but i think this poem would look even more prettier and understanding if you put a backgroung behing the poem, but the poem was greatly written with your deepest thought, and i respect that.
Hope to see you again!
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lovely!
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Deep and appreciated. Rhyme and rhythm flow nicely. Shancy.
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I am still in the experimental phase with this idea, and whether or not I am becoming more and more what I think of, positive thinking definitely feels better. Keep on thinking and writing!
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another reason to love each other
hopefully when we all become aware of what we create we may be a little more careful.
in the image of God,
imagine the impact our thoughts would create, if we could just smile and love
beautiful truth my friend
a pleasure to read
God bless you...
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I look at the beauty of life
and sense its grand design
from the scampering of a squirrel
to the lives of all mankind.
From the unfurling of a flag
To the blossoming of a flower
From the reading of a book
to an early morning shower
Each in its own special way
Has an effect on our lives
If we can but read the signs
We'll have a chance to survive.
Ahh you are my muse today...lol
I loved the smooth flowing poem
Hugs and kisses are sent from a far.
Den
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Allthough i myself find it hard to forgo my often drowning pessimism i love reading your poetry as it is infused with a wonderful optimism that at the very least i can hope to attain. It is most likely, however, impossible that i will be able to find god i'm almost intinsically filled with doubt on that subject. Another great poem.
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Beautiful !!!
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"If I feel resentful and miserable too
and focus on trouble and strife
all that will come, is more of the same
and I'll live a most miserable life"
This passage alone makes me know that we are indeed what we think. Sometimes it is not even necessary to say a thing, thinking it brings with it pleasure, and plight. Excellent!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Blessings follow more blessings...
This is a beautiful poem, very sensitively written. Thank you for sharing your muse's heart and soul with all of us!!! Peace, Cyn
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Hu, if only everybody thought like this, it would be a wonderful world, super poem, hugs
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The rhyming scheme here is very strong, and powerful; nearly completely on the nail every time I would say - which in itself is quite impressive as you didn't pick the easiest comment to write about. Quite enjoyed reading this one as it was so well done - thank you for sharing it with us
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Woo, this is very cool Rhymes delightfully and portrays a wonderful message. I guess its true, negativity only breeds more negativity. We are more attractive too when we come across as confident and assured. Very enjoyable read sis
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wow
hey long time, sorry i havent commented for a long time..this poem was very beautiful and peaceful.i really do love your work tho...keep it comin
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Hi Honey
Thanks for commenting. It's good to be back. I shall be reading a lot of my favs work as i go along. I have a lot of catching up to do LOL
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I love the line 'Thinking good thoughts isn't enough' there are so many Christians that think praising God is all they should do, and forget that Jesus was a man of action and not a dreamer.
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very true
He certainly tried to teach people to have belief. Petty we are so ignorant of the real truth.
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