I don't want to be
Can't they see
I just want them to leave
Can't i be alone
No one is good enough
to be around me
I just want to be
here by myself
and left be
Why do they keep
coming around me
I don't want
them to see
Everything that matters to me
i just want to be alone
i do things my way
and i will take your everything away
The darkness is my friend
As i condemned my internal soul
so that i can be left alone
i will do it my way
even god will not make me stray
i will end my life when i want
he will not tell me when I'm due
Only i can say
what to do
I'm always doing it my way
Author notes
Ok my lie is I'm an up beat person who loves to have people around and hate to be alone and i would never kill my self
A contest entry
- Lie to Me by Justin.
875 points, ended June 17, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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Isnt it so odd that we are good friends even though we are so different. Your poem sucks..(see my lie in that last statement?) (This is a great poem)
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On the line "everything that matter to me," I think you meant "everything that MATTERS to me." No worries, though... we all make typos.
This had a lot of power to it. I was shocked when I read the lie, because you did such a great job with channeling your opposite.
The structure of this poem also helped to highlight the emotions.
Well... I know how much you want to be left alone, so I'll flee now. (haha) Thank you for your entry!
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ty for the typo catch
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