Like pouring salt on a slug,
I curl into myself.
Once again, the extremes
of my nature
have frightened off another.
My standard preamble is always:
I'm fuckin nuts,
a true emotional basketcase.
But you smiled and adored me
anyway
for a moment.
In fine form,
I clutched at your wings, wailing:
Please don't leave me!
But the fading form continues on
in the distance as I devolve
into a puddle of
goo.
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craez but i love it......
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Great stuff!!!
Dark, deep & full of passion with a flowing narrative that made for a compelling read...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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i can soooooooo relate to this one beanie. ya rock gal. salt on a slug.. hehehe yes exactly.
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That's a very interesting comparison, Sidhe.
lol I've been on both sides of that situation before, neither are pretty.
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love should never make you feel like a puddle of goo,love should always have you walking upright with you chest stuck out ,being proud they YOU are in their life.
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Life
complications and a self destructive attitude seems to come into play. And it happens. Run away they do.
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ewwww!
I just had a slimey vision of a salty slug... great imagery!
Good flow and well written
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well writen
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niceeeeeeee
well written...best off luck my friend
juliet -
some times the mind seems to shift in other directions. we're not always giiven the opportunity to glide thru life with the wings of the almighty eagle or the ever so peaceful dove. sometimes were left in limbo to fend off the screeching predators of day and night just to see if our will is strong. you can survive the crazy as any person who considers themself sain. wonderful piece of writing here!
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o.o this is good. I like this alot. i has found a favorite, as of now.
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Awww, I totally know what [or whom] this is about. It's sad yet rational. The imagery is beautiful. Well done dearie =]
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All because of a puddle of goo!
*S*
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