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It Rests on Praa Sands

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There was once a castle in Cornwall,

And this be its story as told here by Paul.

This Pengersick Castle that rests on Praa Sands,

Has left us some stories that none understands.
It’s haunted they tell us, by those who lived there,

And some who were guests and were caught unaware.

‘twas Henry that built the first house on the site,

Engrina Godolphin still haunts here at night.
Her presence transported by second use stones,

The lady in white who just stares . . . and then moans.

The monk oft seen pacing the high battlement,

Killed by old Henry, not at all penitent.
The hopelessness bred here by dastardly deeds,

Gives warning to strangers that no one now heeds.

There's Many a tale told ‘bout John Milliton,

A Sheriff, a Captain and quite evil one,
Who practiced the black arts in candle lit tow’r,

‘midst demons and devils at the midnight hour.

The carrack Saint Anthony foundered off shore,

With booty that Milliton couldn’t ignore.
The treasure that sank there was n’er to be found.

It settled itself into Pengersick’s ground.

The plague graves that carry a spell and a curse,

Cause people to flee them, they’re vile and perverse.

Those victims that cry from the unhallowed graves,

Give fear and give terror the visitor craves.

A girl spins and dances to lure you away,

Her innocent twirling just seeks to waylay

And lure all the spellbound quite close to the edge,

To hurl them straight down from the battlement’s ledge.

The dark demon dog with the glowing red eyes,

The battlement’s safety that hist’ry belies.

A tug on your dress by a boy only four,

A few of the stories of so many more.

So join with the sailors who prowl o’er the land,

The haunting and haunted of Pengersick’s band.

Yet even today for the few who may try,

Old Pengersick Castle can still terrify.

Author notes

Always fun to write about places - sometimes make it up and other times try to use the "facts." Making the facts fit a form is part of the challenge of poetry for me and I enjoy it.

Perhaps a brief explanation for the second stanza. The first house built was a manor house that Henry Pengersick built in perhaps the 1300's. His wife, Engrina Godolphin lived in that house. In the 1500's, John Milliton built what is now the twin tower "castle", using stones from the old manor house. Thus, the ghost of Engrina was transported to the new structure via the stones from the old one and she is said to be the woman in white who appears through the walls and then disappears. Thus the "second use stones" in that stanza.

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  • catz Moderators member
    July 29, 2008

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    I'm always fascinated by stories like this, especially when they involve ghosts. Your tale here lives up to my expectations... a ghost story and being written by a talented story teller and poet. A wonderful job, most enjoyable, Paul.

    And congratulations on the well deserved Gold Trophy

    Dee


  • samm
    July 15, 2008

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    i enjoyed this a lot, and usually i dont really read pieces like this one,
    but the way you took something historical(ly legend)and turned it into poetry is a respectable trait.


  • lindaburns gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    History without the boredom.

    Not everyone believes in ghosts or haunting but your poem would make even the non believers hesitate to visit Pengersick Castle. Well done, as usual.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    Bravo! This is exceptional. What a wonderful retelling of the Pendersick history. Beautifully written. Incredible presentation on this pretty background. Thanks you for this amazing entry and good luck.