I remember The first time i met you
We never really clicked
you were dateing a friend of mine
i didnt see you that way
little did i know is that you would be my only love
later in life we meet again
just once as friends
now so much more
a memory always to be
in my heart is where it will stay
that day is just a memory away
Author notes
i wrote this about one of my most loved memories
the day i met the love of my life in 8th grade
now going on a year as more then firends
A contest entry
- Intrigue me with a memory by Amunet Wolfbane.
1000 points, ended June 8, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Valentine's Day Card! (love poems) by Chocoholic156.
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Comments
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This is a really sweet poem.
I could add a little more to it here:
I remember The first time i met you
You don't have to capitalize "The"
Also, I think that a little punctuation could go a long way, creating space, and movement.
You did a good job with this idea, thank you for entering in my contest.
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Very cute. "rally" should be "really". I've many school memories myself. I enjoyed this, thanks for entering.
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