Teardrops slowly trickle
from the depths
of my aching heart
down my swollen cheeks
Dark clouds
glooming high in the sky
cool raindrops
slowly washing away my tears
A calming peace
softly embraces
my tormented soul
freeing me
As Mother Nature
delicately embraces
me within her undying beauty
and love
In a list
A contest entry
- Nature In All Her Glory by MoonsShadow.
500 points, ended June 6, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so beautiful! The page competes for the beauty of your words...but your words have the lasting quality...Making Nature as your love is unique and magnificent. A bookmark needed!
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lovely
this poem is nicely done -
Words spoken of the gentle
embrace of Mother Nature,
so tenderly caring for all
her children...
Love this my Knight...
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great poen lots of imagry and emotion, flow was natural again nice work my friend
Lucian” -
captivating
As always, your words captivate the readers heart.Your words come alive and dance upon the pages of love with such sensual beauty flowing from your quill.I send to you many beautiful blessings of love and happiness, take care beautiful one and here are my roses to you,thanking you for the roses you sent to me!
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With this poem you will captivate Linda's heart for sure, like you did to mine. Bravo dear friend. I am so glad to see you again on the roll.
~Sonja~
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Nature (Gia)...Mother to us all. Her beauty emplores you to awaken and breath within...only then can you apprechaite what she has done for all of us! Alas, your words take mine away in this poem so well written! ~Sie
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I think I need to borrow from your sense of calm. It took much longer than is right for me to find and read your latest poems, but now that I'm here I can soak up your words and be happy.
Your words are beautiful, as always.
Love Margaret
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Nature does have a calming effect and often when we feel down we escape from our normal surroundings to somewhere serene to think and come to terms with what ails us. I find anywhere near water is particularly theraputic for the heart and soul.
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Ed
as you know this picture touches my heart, as it was part of me for so long, I still enjoyed this poem as it has a touch of sadnee with in it...the joys of nature is so like the whole world and into the depths of each ocean...thank you for this great entry as well good luck..
Linda
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again a very very good poem, one i love so much,
you are a wonderful poet and man,
i love this poem so much, keep penning,
all my love,
kitty xxxx
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