Your touch
smooth, comforting
burning like fire
so wrong
this is wrong
we shouldn't
but..
your lips
caressing, lovely
forceful
I'm scared
Don't do this
Then I give up
I suc cumb
and the fire errupts
Author notes
This poem is funny to me. My bff zoe was tlaking about an experiance with her bf and so I wrote this for her as a joke. I thought it was funny. I was going to enter it into a contest called titles, but chickened out cause i didn't eant to post it online
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- ANYTHING GOES BUT YOU MUST MAKE ME LAUGH by Juno101.
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wow very sexy i like it alot! even if it was a joke you did a fabulous job
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omg i love thiis u
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thanx haha. I should have entered it into the contest but i chickened out.
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I liked it. I thought it was very poetic and had great imagery.I loved the lines. I succumb and the fire errupts. You did a great job. Keep writing from your heart.
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thanx. My friend was a great inspiration for this poem. She is funny so I was trying to capture her ora.
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