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Fire!

Your touch
smooth, comforting
burning like fire
so wrong
this is wrong
we shouldn't
but..
your lips
caressing, lovely
forceful
I'm scared
Don't do this
Then I give up
I suc cumb
and the fire errupts

Author notes

This poem is funny to me. My bff zoe was tlaking about an experiance with her bf and so I wrote this for her as a joke. I thought it was funny. I was going to enter it into a contest called titles, but chickened out cause i didn't eant to post it online

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Comments

  • cherrysmile
    June 5
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    omg i love thiis u

    • inhisimage
      June 5
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      thanx haha. I should have entered it into the contest but i chickened out.
  • hose30
    June 4

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    I liked it. I thought it was very poetic and had great imagery.I loved the lines. I succumb and the fire errupts. You did a great job. Keep writing from your heart.


    • inhisimage
      June 5
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      thanx. My friend was a great inspiration for this poem. She is funny so I was trying to capture her ora.