You stare me down
with your black eyes afire
the grimace twines into a smirk
i told you i could never love you
now you come to avenge
all your wasted efforts
to bind me with you
you're cornering me
now i have no where to run
my lungs try to keep up with the stale panic
your sweaty palms grasp my wrists
pulling me toward your confined abyss
my screams dissolve into the night
no knight in silver armor can save me now
you yank my head to face your obession
you tell me i'm only yours
i can only wince at the pain
crushing your lips to mine
i can taste your rotten saliva
feel your sickening hunger
my breath is your breath
overwhelming me with sin
scarring my memories for eternity
my guardian angel has walked away
in heaven or hell someone please save me
from my first kiss
A contest entry
- Imaginary by know one.
750 points, ended August 29, 2008, 109 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Is A Kiss by nevadapoet.
700 points, ended September 8, 2008, 50 entries
Silver trophy winner
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WOW...a very powerful write. A definate different take on a kiss...a sad take on it. The write was perfectly penned full of anguish and despair. A great entry to the contest, which I thank you for and wish you best of luck.
Nevadapoet -
wow
so much emotion,hope this is not from a real life experrience!really well written,thanks for entering! -
That waz awesum!!!, luv it
, mi fav lines were You stare me down
with your black eyes afire
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Wow this is really goo
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I know the feeling on this one, I cried for someone to save me from my first kiss. Very very nice and very well written.
"You stare me down
with your black eyes afire" My favirote lines
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