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Wishes

Wishes

They won't come true

Not for me

Not for you

Never shall we wish again

For what you see

Is just pretend

Author notes

I was up late again, and I've always been partial to some type of rhyme so I just jotted down this small one.

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  • wave1080
    September 7
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    Awww!

    Sweet write


  • shiratikva
    December 21, 2008
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    Short and nice.


  • whitenoise
    December 20, 2008

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    i liked the meaning behind this and feel i have to agree though wishes may be false as is life, nice short poem abigail xx


  • teddybare
    November 6, 2008

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    aint it a shame?

    yes most interesting read here what we see is all pretend untill we learn to see again

    any way loved the write
    ~teddybare~


  • mystic oceania
    June 10, 2008

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    Nice. I'm sorry I didn't call you back. I'm out of minutes and I don't have long distance. I'll call you as soon as I do. I hope everything's ok with you. I know you're strong so just have some confidence in yourself. Love you.

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